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This is my character writing

This is my Short story

The Chocolate Mystery

Wow! I just woke up this morning and everything was different... My room was made of chocolate. I looked around my room thinking why and how this happened. Hi I’m Lila I’m eleven years old and so is my twin-brother Ben. He’s thinks he’s the bees knees because he’s the slightest bit older than me. Which when you think about it would get quite annoying as it does.

Lila ran into Ben’s room. “Ben, Ben wake up”, Lila whispered. “What!”, Ben yelled sleepily. “Sshh you’ll wake Mum and Dad up”, Lila hushed. “I think we’ve got another mission”, She said. Ben jumped out of his bed onto the floor. “WHAT! On Easter, cool!”. Lila and Ben got dressed and then Lila said, “We mustn’t forget our special coats”.

Ben and Lila pulled on their coats and set off into the woods. They both kept very quiet trying to hear something mysterious. They heard nothing until they were halfway into the woods. They heard an evil laugh which sounded like it was underground. They started getting gadgets out of their special coats when suddenly out of thin air appeared a very thin, Buck-Toothed, Mean looking bunny. The bunny said, “Haha I have got you now” as he grabbed them.

The bunny pushed a button on his belt and in a puff of smoke they were in his underground lair. Lila and Ben got thrown into a net. The evil bunny exclaimed evily, “I am just going to test something out on you and it won’t hurt a bit. Oh and by the way my name is Apep”. Apep starts concocting up a potion. Ben quietly grabs out his knife, So Apep doesn’t hear. He cuts through the net. Lila climbs out after Ben, She opens up a book filled with a story and flips to an empty page. “Blastocomoto!”, They yell together.

Apep is under the control of their laser guns. “Are you the person who turned Lila’s room into chocolate?”, Ben assumed. “Maybe”. Ben started giving him a zap as he said in a stern voice, “DON’T MESS WITH US APEP!”. He cried out, “Yes”. They yelled out ‘Blastocomoto’ again. The children rose up into the air. Lila zapped Apep into the laser and shot him into the book just before it closed. “All we need now is an evil Santa to finish off our story”, Lila Giggled.

Before they got out of the lair they decided that they would use Apep’s lair as they’re own super secret lair. They skipped home as Ben yelled, “MISSION COMPLETE little sis”. When we arrived gome Mum and Dad were up. Mum was making breakfast and Dad was slurping his coffee as he read the newspaper. “What’s for breakfast Mum?’’. They said hungrily.” Mum announces, “Chocolate pancakes plus bacon and eggs”. They’re tummies rumbled. Mum served our big breakfast and we gulped it down.

After we had washed our faces and made our beds, Mum called us into the lounge. She hands us each a piece of paper. “What’s this?”. “Read it and you’ll find out”, Mum said as she left the room. Ben and Lila sat on the couch very puzzled. As Ben started to read the piece of paper Lila exclaimed, “I got it! It’s a treasure hunt. Mum has hidden our easter eggs and we have to find them if we want them”. Of course they wanted easter eggs, They are both chocoholics. As soon as Ben clicked onto what was happening he raced after Lila who had already started. They both had different clues. They read they’re clues again.

Lila was the first one to finish. She found 14 easter eggs all over the place. She was getting bored waiting for Ben so she went to find him. She found him tangled up in the vines hanging down from our front porch. Lila couldn’t help herself from giggling. She helped Ben out of the vines. “How many easter eggs have you got Ben”, Lila asked as she looked into his basket there was only one in there. So she helped him complete the treasure hunt.

When they went back inside Mum giggled, “I was just about to send out a search party for you”. We looked at her all serious because that was just another one of her lame jokes.